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Writing Wednesday – Keep it Tight

26 Wednesday Mar 2014

Posted by angelacavanaugh in Writing Wednesday

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dialogue, how to, how to write, tags, writer, writing

Last Week’s WW: 10 Things to Know About Writing Scenes

“Hello,” he called.
“Oh, hi Jim,” she replied.
“How are you doing today?” He questioned.
“Just fine. And yourself?” She returned.
“Fine as well,” he provided.
“Glad to hear it. What brings you by?” She asked.
“I needed to get more information about that body you found,” he pressed.

There’s a few things wrong with that conversation.
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